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d-Z1R3
17-05-2008, 07:35 PM
What do you guys think, this is my shots from yesterdays outing with julez at the Womans Factory in Hobart

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u87/blitZ-M3L/cascade%20garden%20and%20womens%20factory/IMG_5633-2.jpg

C&C Most welcome :D
MistieWatters
17-05-2008, 07:53 PM
Nice shot, but I would have liked to see it slightly more front on, might have reduced the shadows a little.
jurujoh
17-05-2008, 10:17 PM
You know I say it as it is Tim. I hopeyou take these comments with the good intentions that are meant.

Well I was hoping for better from this one. When you showed it to me in the camera, I thought it was really good. This, to me anyway, has too much contrast and alot of the good light you captured has been lost.

Knowing the image, re-processing , would be worthwhile to try and maintain that light and allow some more detail in the shadows.

Jules
d-Z1R3
18-05-2008, 03:00 AM
yea i know what you mean, so i took it back into editing and i can up with this revised version. i was kinda in a hurry to process it before i went out for work tonite.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u87/blitZ-M3L/cascade%20garden%20and%20womens%20factory/IMG_5633-25.jpg

i am happier with this one :D
MistieWatters
18-05-2008, 07:20 AM
Much better PP on that one :)
Mat
18-05-2008, 04:44 PM
The second frame to me is definitely the better shot.

More character and depth.

Mat
d-Z1R3
18-05-2008, 05:31 PM
second shot is the same as the first one, i just had to tinker abit with the balances abit more to get the contrast and highlights to come out correctly.

but thanks for the great c&c it really encourages me to get out more and take more shots!
jurujoh
19-05-2008, 01:19 AM
Much better Tim! Puts it more into context also.

Jules
MistieWatters
19-05-2008, 11:58 AM
Just looking again I am thinking it might need rotating CCW one degree....
cazzaritch
19-05-2008, 09:19 PM
I really like this shot. I wonder what it would look like with a sepia tone?
d-Z1R3
20-05-2008, 03:52 AM
as requested sepia tone :D

but i think it still looks better in black and white

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u87/blitZ-M3L/cascade%20garden%20and%20womens%20factory/IMG_5633-3.jpg
cazzaritch
21-05-2008, 08:12 PM
Wow

I really love this in sepia, I think it makes a fantastic partner to the shot of the lady you took on the same trip.
d-Z1R3
22-05-2008, 05:06 PM
thanks for tht, possibly two of my best photos to date!
RichardW
22-05-2008, 06:00 PM
Just looking again I am thinking it might need rotating CCW one degree....

Yep, IMHO the later version is much better.
I'd use a Perspective Crop top and bottom to straighten the roof line and keep the seat in the same perspective.