Second shooting a low-key wedding

[mrjet]

Hi Guys,
I havnt posted much here in quite a while, but I still lurk sometimes, and I really like what I see!

I second shot this wedding for David Freund (http://davidfreund.com/) a few weeks ago and would love some feedback. This is only the second time I have shot a wedding in any capacity (both second shooting)

It was very laid back, just the couple, their two small kids, and two friends. In some ways it was a bit like a family shoot with a ceremony thrown in :rofl

I have done minimal processing with nearly all of these, using nothing but Adobe RAW.

#1 - The dress
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522655487_ic63D-L.jpg

#2 - The couple had a sand pit with a cool little boat setup so we let the kids play while we took their picture =)
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522693206_dAeqD-L.jpg

#3
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522671298_GEZZA-L.jpg

#4
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522679835_FmExs-L.jpg

#5 - The bride making final adjustments
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522714387_3zVfo-L.jpg

#6 - Hello.... peeping tom!
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522710694_QB5o9-L.jpg

[mrjet]

#7 - We walked down to the ceremony on the beach, a short walk through the coastal scrub. Please let me know if you think this processing works.. ?
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522719575_7Sfnv-L.jpg

#8 - This was everyone at the wedding, except the photographers
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522734587_LhVFi-L.jpg

#9
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522749433_Xxdge-L.jpg

#10 - One of my favourites of the day
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522740334_PM5Uy-L.jpg

#11 - The wedding kiss (almost:))
http://pixelplay.smugmug.com/photos/522752357_se5rv-L.jpg

[mrjet]

#12
http://lightrobber.com/gallery/8031727_RdGrF#P-1-15

#13
http://lightrobber.com/photos/522723501_ndPAo-L.jpg

[~Raven~]

Excellent series Jethro.....I'm not sure on the processing of #7 tho....I can't quite decide if I like it or not, but if the B&G like it then that is all that matters. Well done.

[mrjet]

Thanks Jodi - because I'm second shooting everything is done through the prime photog so I dont know what they will like.

I think I will crop some of the left side off #13 to balance it up a bit and get rid of some of the dead space

[1073841]

i like 10 too. it will be even better if the couple were kissing - with the same effect

[mrjet]

Thanks - it would have been nice, but cant get everything :)