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brooke+3
18-01-2009, 10:16 PM
Hi
I went to my cousins wedding yesturday and the pro photographer let me work with her these are some of the shots that i got i would really love some c&c.

jessika
18-01-2009, 10:59 PM
hi, these are really nice. number 3 is my favourite .. number 2 is good also, but the window is a little bit of a distraction and draws my eyes away .. but other than that they are good :) what equipment do you use?

brooke+3
19-01-2009, 07:35 AM
Hi Thanks for your reply i have a nikon D60 the first and third where taken with 18-55 lens and the other was a 55-200 i did all editing in lightroom i am really still learning i have only had my first SLR camera for about 4 weeks .

Here is couple more does the effect on the second one work i am still looking at it and not sure.

With the first one same pose different photo do you think its better in colour or black and white.

jessika
19-01-2009, 01:41 PM
hi :) the 1st on i black and white looks heaps better. and the 2nd one oh could go in a bridal magazine .. very nice .. probably one of my favourite photos i have seen in a while .. gorgeous :) if you have only had your camera for 4 weeks then u are going to offer great things .. very well done :)

brooke+3
19-01-2009, 03:30 PM
hi :) the 1st on i black and white looks heaps better. and the 2nd one oh could go in a bridal magazine .. very nice .. probably one of my favourite photos i have seen in a while .. gorgeous :) if you have only had your camera for 4 weeks then u are going to offer great things .. very well done :)

Thankyou so much for saying that u have made my day :) :)

habro
19-01-2009, 03:43 PM
Great shots, my only c&c would be that in the 5th picture, I find the white insie the car a bit distracting [the sunlit bit just to the right of her face], I keep trying to figure out what it is. Maybe selectively tone that down a little bit?

brooke+3
19-01-2009, 03:59 PM
Great shots, my only c&c would be that in the 5th picture, I find the white insie the car a bit distracting [the sunlit bit just to the right of her face], I keep trying to figure out what it is. Maybe selectively tone that down a little bit?

Hi i am going to give it ago and i will post when i am done but i am still learnig photoshop not real good at it yet.:)

chengrsh
19-01-2009, 04:10 PM
hi :) the 1st on i black and white looks heaps better. and the 2nd one oh could go in a bridal magazine .. very nice .. probably one of my favourite photos i have seen in a while .. gorgeous :) if you have only had your camera for 4 weeks then u are going to offer great things .. very well done :)

Wow. I like the 2nd photo. Nice skin tone. nice composition.:)

habro
19-01-2009, 04:15 PM
Hi i am going to give it ago and i will post when i am done but i am still learnig photoshop not real good at it yet.:)

Try selecting it with the selection tool, then sliding the saturation down [adjustments->hue/saturation]

brooke+3
19-01-2009, 04:40 PM
Try selecting it with the selection tool, then sliding the saturation down [adjustments->hue/saturation]


I just tryed but you can see where i have gone around it with the selection tool .

jessika
19-01-2009, 06:15 PM
is wedding photography something that you are looking to get into?

brooke+3
19-01-2009, 06:43 PM
is wedding photography something that you are looking to get into?


yes i watched my pro at my wedding 12 months ago and ever since then been fasinated with it i have always loved taking photos . I have since been a second photographer at two family weddings i just havent got my head around photoshop yet i think lightroom is easier to use . :)

habro
19-01-2009, 07:09 PM
I selected the bright white areas on his shirt with the magic wand, feathered the selection by 2 & then dropped lightness by 1, made a bit of difference.

However my initial comments were based on the thumbnails & not the fullsize. I think it was mainly I couldn't figure out what the white actually was. However on opening the pic [should have done that in the first place], I can see what it is... so it actually doesn't need fixing.

Very nice pics though, and I agree that 5th one could be in a mag somewhere

brooke+3
21-01-2009, 05:32 PM
Heres one more for you guys. This photo is of the brides father his wife brides mother died 8 weeks ago suddenly i neally cry everytime i look at this photo he has so much emotion in his face don't you think.

jessika
21-01-2009, 09:36 PM
ohhh :( thats sad .. they all look very happy here

Photogenic
21-01-2009, 11:15 PM
Great shots. I like the black and white of the bride specifically because you have eye contact - not always required in these shots as the colour version works well here as well - however, the eye contact really adds that extra something.

The car shot and flower shot is really well done as well.

Your second photo with the bride and bridesmaids does have a distracting background which takes away from the shot but it is a fun shot.

Linda

Eva
29-01-2009, 09:55 AM
Still an amateur here but I might suggest, if the line is too strong around the selection tool, after you select it, Select>Modify>Feather.. Then just fiddle around with how much

birdie
21-02-2009, 10:19 PM
Shot 5 looks great... well done :-)

xaiya
02-03-2009, 09:30 PM
hi
the b&w bridal veil pic seems too dull and flat for me, i would luv to see it with a bit more light and contrast. the colour version appeals to me more as i feel the warm natural lighting and colour saturation works better for a diffused pic.

the pic with the brides maids seems a bit chaotic with the house in the background. I think you have done pretty well for a 1st wedding :)

littlealbert
10-03-2009, 04:36 PM
Love the 4th and 5th shots. The car one is really something special! Definitely a shot for the mantlepiece :)